June 11, 2003
Travesty

It's been too long since I've written an entry with some heft, but I'm still feeling empty-headed, so I'm raiding the filing cabinet. Here's something I wrote way back when - it contains what is, in my estimation, the worst joke I've ever written. First person to identify the joke wins a ghostly visitation from Raymond Chandler and Christopher Marlowe...

Philip Marlowe's Doctor Faustus

FAUSTUS: It was a slow day, a slow day like every other day here in my office. Nothing to do but drink whiskey that curls around my stomach like a snake, and think thoughts that curl around my brain like an even bigger snake - an anaconda, maybe. Sure, I’ve been a doctor, I’ve been a lawyer. I’m even ordained - by one of those two-bit, nickel-n-dime, penny-for-your-thoughts operations that advertise in the back of Playboy - the Church of I Buy It for the Articles. And now I’m a dick. A private dick. But it ain’t enough.

MEPHISTOPHELES suddenly appears under a red light.

MEPHISTOPHELES: Of course it isn’t.

FAUSTUS: I haven’t seen that much red light since I was on the vice squad. "Who are you?" I said.

MEPHISTOPHELES: Mephistopheles. Why are you still narrating?

FAUSTUS: — he said. "Listen, pal," I answered. "This is my office, you got that? My turf, my space, my digs, and mi casa ain’t su casa, so I’ll narrate whenever I —"

MEPHISTOPHELES: Your phone is going to ring.

It does. FAUSTUS answers it.

FAUSTUS: Faustus, private dick. Yeah. No. No, I can’t pay it this week. No, not next week, either. Listen, pal, I’m broke. I’m busted. I ain’t got any dough. Well, same to you!

MEPHISTOPHELES: I can help you with that. Power. Money. Fame. Dames.

FAUSTUS: Dames?

MEPHISTOPHELES: Dames.

FAUSTUS: And what do you want in return? You don’t look like the philanthropic type.

MEPHISTOPHELES: A small thing, really...infinitesimal —

FAUSTUS: I’m not switching long distance companies.

MEPHISTOPHELES: You don’t have to...if you give me your immortal soul.

FAUSTUS: You’re bughouse, pal.

MEPHISTOPHELES (producing a contract): No harm in signing, then.

FAUSTUS: Power, money, fame?

MEPHISTOPHELES: All yours.

FAUSTUS: What the hell.

MEPHISTOPHELES: Yes. What the hell. FAUSTUS signs the contract. Excellent. Now, your wish is my command.

FAUSTUS: I could use a vacation.

MEPHISTOPHELES: Rome? Bangkok? Rio?

FAUSTUS: Sounds good.

MEPHISTOPHELES: Of course.

Dramatic lighting change as MEPHISTOPHELES produces...a Viewmaster.

MEPHISTOPHELES (as FAUSTUS clicks through the pictures): There it is, Faustus. The whole world. And it’s all yours. Everest. The Taj Mahal. Machu Pichu. The Parthenon. Disneyland.

FAUSTUS (whistles): Who’s the dame standing next to the six-foot mouse?

MEPHISTOPHELES: Snow White.

FAUSTUS: Great gams.

MEPHISTOPHELES: You can do better. Faustus, meet Helen of Troy.

Enter HELEN OF TROY.

FAUSTUS: Helen of Troy. What a knockout. She had a face like a face that could launch a thousand ships. She looked like trouble. The kind of trouble that says to a guy, "Hey pal, come get me."

HELEN OF TROY: Hello, Faustus.

She kisses him passionately.

FAUSTUS: She was a great kisser. And me without a Trojan.

MEPHISTOPHELES: One more joke like that and you’re going straight to hell. I can do it, too. It’s in the contract.

FAUSTUS checks the contract and shrugs.

HELEN OF TROY: Say, gumshoe, let’s find someplace more private.

FAUSTUS: Well, dollface...

HELEN OF TROY: Come on, Faustus. Remember, you’re damned if you do —

MEPHISTOPHELES: — and you’re damned if you don’t. So you might as well have a little fun in the meantime.

FAUSTUS: That’s where you’re wrong, Mephistopheles. (He pulls out a gun.) Your days of Pelopennesian pimping are over. I’m bringing you in on vice charges. You’re going downtown.

MEPHISTOPHELES: You fool, Faustus! You’ll never take me alive!

He disappears in a flash of red light and a quick blackout.

FAUSTUS: Damn. Come on, Helen. You’ve got an appointment with a paddy wagon.

HELEN OF TROY: But Faustus, what will I do without you?

FAUSTUS: Well, sweetheart, you’ll always have Paris.

HELEN OF TROY (as they exit): You are going to hell if you keep making jokes like that.

FAUSTUS: What can I do? I’m a dick. A private dick.

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