This week I mailed out a revision of my Clarion West Week Six time travel story. Things I added to make it work:

– A made-up amino acid
– A causal loop
– Three extra eyes on my aliens
– A Nobel Prize medal
– Frozen burritos
– Foreshadowing

Mentioning the frozen burritos is probably giving too much away.

One thought on “Additions

  1. lindsley

    Well, first because it’s very very good. And second because you’re the -d(evil) and insist on tempting me with the existence of armadillo purses.


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